Deceptive Outlaw by Dawn White

28331692Title: Deceptive Outlaw
Author: Dawn White
Publisher: Raven's Seduction Press
Published: Oct. 23, 2015
Pages: 428
Genre: Romance/MC
Review: ebook provided by author
Buy Links: Amazon, Amazon.uk 



Rebecca is a beautiful ATF agent, sent undercover to bring down an outlaw biker gang. Unfortunately for her, Gavin makes it almost impossible to think about anything but his dreamy body. Rebecca solves the case, and accidentally falls in love with the Outlaw biker president of the Sinister Sons Syndicate, and goes on another scary adventure. Will Rebecca survive the new mission, or will this be her last? Rebecca takes another dangerous mission, this time in California. Rebecca becomes reckless and the outcome won't leave her unscathed. Will Rebecca's bad boy biker Gavin be reunited, or will she be alone forever?


I received this book to give an honest review.

Now I didn't know this had both Deceptive Outlaw and Sinister Outlaw within it. Even though it says complete set series, that was pretty cool. So why would I give this book a three rating? Well I have sat on this review all day trying to gather my thoughts up on this. Now I have read a MC book before so I am not too familiar with all the works on how the MC should go but there were some things that bothered me with this book. Now I believe the author did a great job with building the character Rebecca up, I really loved how the author transformed her from ATF to biker chick with just a flick of clothing in a way. 
Rebecca is an ATF agent who is going undercover to stop a biker gang what she doesn't expect is to fall for the president of this gang. We see as a relationship happens between the two and the dangers that Rebecca finds herself in not only once but on multiple occasions. The ending has you wondering who has it out for Rebecca and will she find out who it is before she finds herself hurt again. 
The way this book ended has me wanting to read the next book as I want to know the answers Rebecca wants and needs. I need to know where the relationship between herself and Gavin is going to go. 
So why I gave it three stars.......the story felt rushed, some of the scenes felt unrealistic to me, and Gavin just didn't click for me as a biker dude. 












SPOILER       ALERT...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................



So just so you know the below sentences are spoilers I have given you a warning so do not read any further if you want to be spoiler free.

The issues I had. 
1. The story feeling rushed. We meet Rebecca we learn of her assignment she meets with Gavin and not even a full day later she is sleeping with him. He uses a condom with a side chick but not with Rebecca. When she gets hurt she is always rushing into another assignment.
2. There is hardly any dialogue between Gavin and Rebecca no getting to know each other it is always " I love you." "I love you darlin." What ever happened to getting to know one another I understand keeping some things quiet as one is in law enforcement and the other is into illegal activities.
3. Who was the pledge who was one of the people behind the sex trafficking? I felt he was just a character pulled out of somewhere and then never mentioned again.
4. When you lose six months of your life how is the news just going to report it when you magically turn on the tv.
5. When you lose six months of your life how do you go back to work after being out of the hospital so quickly without a time frame? 
6. During this time where in the hell was Gavin at? Did you not wonder where he was? 
7. Why did Agent Mia have to see a shrink but Rebecca didn't? I would have thought Rebecca would have had to see someone to help her get through everything she has been going through. 
8. How close is Rebecca to the other ladies in the club? The reason I ask is it seems she knows one of them well enough that they can just text her with good news like Rebecca didn't seem to have any type of relationship with them or so I thought. 







Dawn White
Dawn White resides in Southern WV with her husband and three daughters. She has always been an avid reader and seems to live a busy life as a wife and mother. One thing that keeps Dawn sane is her writing. She will always strive to give you the best of her busy mind.



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